Five days ago I sorted writing prompts by the top of the past year, Roses are red people are fake I stay to myself shirt. found the respective prompt and been reading all parts of the silver tongue over the last days. Very enjoyable, very fun to read and I really like the system of magic. Thank you very much for writing and keep it up! Dude, I did the same thing 3 days ago and it’s my go-to whenever I’m on my break or about to go to bed, Silvertongue is like crack to me right now.
Damn, these cliffhangers are mad haha. Also is this the same McD where Jon and Aedan first met? If so, I like how it’s a place where Jon’s life always changes when we see him go there haha. Noah or whoever is the boss is, would like to extend their reach and influence a little more and want Jon to head a secondary crew down in that area. He’ll answer to no one except the higher-ups in the main crew and report any problems/issues/new demos as soon as possible. He’ll also have to enforce whatever rules they give him, but he’ll also get their protection if a rival crew decides to pay a visit. Some points yes, some points no! I think you’re being nicer than I am haha. But it’s not a terribly complicated matter, either, so it’ll follow something along those lines. I love the start of the final mini-arc begins at the same McDonalds. It’s a great callback to the start of the series! And, I love how it’s Jon/Aedan/Jake again, the first three, I believe?
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Matt’s even mentioned. I don’t like this Noah guy. He’s too confident for someone stepping into enemy territory. I have a feeling that his Relic is gonna be something nasty. My nerves! the details about Jake and Tyler emerging as crew second and third in command is a nice touch! Adding structure and protocol makes this more organized! Loving it! I don’t know if you mean to keep it a secret or not, but is there any chance you could describe the characters a little more? I’m just having trouble imagining them. I can try and up it a little xD I’m not hiding it, it’s just not always the first thing that occurs to me to do haha. I’ll smooth some better descriptions in when I do edits. I think you mentioned John had a bunch of ear piercings (OG bad guys were trying to find his relic and were looking at piercings on his ear? I don’t remember exactly…) Anyway, he’s a skinny, tall, goth-ish guy to me as a result. Someone I knew in college, actually haha.
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For whatever reason, I have a hard time seeing Aedan as a ginger redhead. Roses are red people are fake I stay to myself shirt. Maybe dark red, like Damian Lewis? But honestly, I picture him to look like Jamie Dornan sans beard. I don’t have a clue about what the game was or how it was won, but I think I’ve got a good idea of what the wish was. It was for the kids to be brought back. The big key to it is that “Noon doesn’t always give the kind of help keep kids want.” To me, it sounds like Noon grants the traditional genie wishes. The kind that fulfills what you asked for, but not what you wanted or what would be best. If OP’s wish was for her kids to come back and she managed to win the game, her wish was granted in such a cruel way.