this was a bit hard for me to read as it was too gory for my taste at times, Just a woman who loves toothless and stitch shirt. but a great read nevertheless. was very captivating, although the ending could be improved. congrats! Damn, that was good. The atmosphere you created was reminiscent of the midnight ghost party in the novel version of The Shining, blended with the game Little Nightmares. Driving a tank isn’t really that hard, she’d probably figure it out with trial and error. Figuring out all the support systems in a modern tank would be the challenge.
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And fixing it when it inevitably breaks. I voted for the car. It’s the thing most likely to have been near the abduction sites. A tank would be interesting, but it would imply they raided a military base, which would have fought back and got the word out… I want to keep believing that Earth as a whole is still ok. This. I also think that car is a better tool for character development, both for Jasmine and for aliens, because it represents not just our tech, but our culture. And the tank’s tech is already kinda present in other bits – in the first book, Nako has both a human gun (weapons) and a tablet (electronics). There isn’t much more to the tank other than that plus optics (which can be also present as the scope on the gun and camera in the phone/tablet) and a bit of the awe factor. I just want to say that it doesn’t have to be a modern tank. Plenty of surplus Soviet vehicles in the hands of civilian collectors and tank fans (in various states of repair).
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The counter to this argument though, is that all the races are big on genetic modification. All of them tweaking themselves into a reasonably consistent body style makes sense for ergonomics. One chair fits all. So would say that this one style just so happening to be completely humanoid (which humans were not part of this genetic modification) is lazy and unrealistic. Also I would say that that reasoning leads to the opposite conclusion: in the transcripts universe DNA is an asset, and it is implied that it is fading, the races are losing information and that is why humans DNA is so unique and powerful (in this way transcripts is very well thought out, its not just a generic “humans are OP just cos” but has an actual world-law consistent reason.)
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Personally, I think a toy drone would be fun to watch them with. Just a woman who loves toothless and stitch shirt. Fits in the palm of your hand, does complex calculations many, many times per second just to remain stable. And all that can be cheaper than a meal at Olive Garden. I’m not sure why it’s not allowing the paperback to be sold in Canada. But I am looking into other methods of publishing, this is my very timid toe-dipping into the waters. I promise you that if I publish on another platform